our walk in the field- breaking the ice on mud puddles Published by Chris Hicks Chris Hicks: monkeybrew at gmail dot com View all posts by Chris Hicks
i like your haiku, Chris!
especially the double meaning of line two
Very nice.
Nice pivot, Chris.
enjoyed your ku, Chris
harvest moon–
through billowing white clouds
red-eye flight
Excellent haiku, and I love “mud puddles”! Also, as stated above, good second line! ;-)
Wonderful! Mud puddles such a clean way to get dirty.
walk among the stars–
night air
bore her scent