his shirts ~ I button myself in heartache Published by Susan Sonnen Susan Sonnen: my5joy at yahoo dot com View all posts by Susan Sonnen
Susan, _I scold myself for my “too many comments on t/w,” but I can’t overlook your jewel! _Reading your words is -sensing- and by sensing them, how could anyone -not feel-? Heartfull ! tnx -M Reply
waking up: within my arms your heartbeat (another from my chapbook) (thank you for your tiny words) Reply
Very moving.
Sharp!
oh yes susan …the community of shirt huggers ….
your old t shirt
just smells
of washing powder
Beautiful haiku, but sad. I am sorry for your heartache.
my old shirt
so comfortably resting
on your young breasts
(from my chapbook)
Susan,
_I scold myself for my “too many comments on t/w,” but I can’t overlook your jewel!
_Reading your words is -sensing- and by sensing them, how could anyone -not feel-?
Heartfull !
tnx -M
Nice work.Memorable.
waking up:
within my arms
your heartbeat
(another from my chapbook)
(thank you for your tiny words)
susan, your poem holds my heart.
your old sweater
wraps around me
without your arms
your side of the bed-
chilling winds
through the pines
Shivers everywhere!
Susan, your words are words that prove that we don’t need many words.
rainy autumn morn
blackbirds line the wire–
where sun shined days before