rubbernecking
the sunset geese —
our tailgater honks
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David Giacalone
A former lawyer-mediator, David has been a Haiku Advocate at his popular weblog f/k/a since 2004, mixing "breathless" punditry aimed mostly at legal professionals with one-breath poetry by Honored Guest haijin. His own haiku and senryu can be found at f/k/a, in many journals, and at his dagosan's haiku diary. He lives along the Mohawk River in Schenectady, NY.
email contact: dgiacalone at nycap.rr.com
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I love the sense of humour in this one! It certainly repays savouring!
Thanks, everybody. Don’t get me started on tailgaters. And, Aurora, you’ve got to get out and meet a few more lawyers. Of course, my being an ex-lawyer probably wins me a few points with you.
i had this same experience driving home a few days ago and wanted to write a haiku about it. you beat me to the punch, but you did so in a much more elegant manner.
I love the sense of humour in this one! It certainly repays savouring!
Under the circumstances, I confess I might honk, too. But, hey, if it inspires a good ku like this one, where’s the harm?
WOW.
I aspire to be able to write haiku like that.
Nice work from my favourite lawyer/haijin. :)
Thanks, everybody. Don’t get me started on tailgaters. And, Aurora, you’ve got to get out and meet a few more lawyers. Of course, my being an ex-lawyer probably wins me a few points with you.
HaHaHa! This haiku completely captures the driving experience here in S. Korea!
. . . a lovely way of showing a human/nature connection.
i had this same experience driving home a few days ago and wanted to write a haiku about it. you beat me to the punch, but you did so in a much more elegant manner.
Love it, David!
And a Happy New Year to you!
:-)
Lary
cross moonless field
this last night of the year
silent shadows in repose