below zero
the chimney smoke too
rises slowly
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Charles Trumbull
Charles Trumbull is an editor for Encyclopaedia Britannica and lives in Evanston, Illinois. He has been writing haiku since 1991. He was editor (1996-2002) of the Haiku Society of America Newsletter, president of the HSA in 2004 and 2005, and an organizer of the Haiku North America 1999 conference. He is currently editor of Modern Haiku and proprietor of Deep North Press, a publisher of haiku books. No Web page yet; e-mail: trumbullc at comcast dot net View all posts by Charles Trumbull
Very expressive Charles!
warmly,
kala
just beyond
the chimney’s shadow
the shadow of smoke
Wonderful and very clever.
Terra Martin
Beautifully done, Charles!
Brrrrrrrrrrrr!
Reminds me of Peter Reading’s book called -273.15.
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Really great to see you on Tinywords again!
icebergs
along Lake Michigan…
second cup of coffee
Excellent haiku…and very timely considering the current cold snap.
Nicely done.
Love this ku. Very good.
Really good, a classic.
I like it. Winter slows me down too, but you got me to write.
bitter woodsmoke
ice crystals in the night
The Sisters dance
Charles, a rich haiku_!
Judi… an equally rich response_!
_I see The Sister Snow’s dance, whirling to the music… of rising smoke.
_That he -made you write- is a further complement to Charles.
_M
Lovely haiku! I agree, a classic. Both literal and suggestive…
Carole
ellen, happy new year-
your iceberg provides food for thought; an afterthought, were you enjoying ice coffee(miami thinking)
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charles, interesting observation. when i’m fortunate to experience such extremes, i’m slow to rise.
winters in lucerne show my affection for comforters; the heat is turned off while sleeping.
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frigid winds–
even the windchimes
sing a different tune
Happy New Year to you too, Bob. I like your windchimes haiku very much. I am definitely “North” and my Swedish Nanna introduced me to hot strong coffee at an early age. However, being definitely older now as well, it’s a special treat! All the best…
This is simply an excellent poem!
an immense column
suporting the winter sky-
the smoke