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  1. Really like your work, Jeffery. “five up, two over” is where I live.

    that window,
    the one flickering blue
    eyewitness news

  2. why aren’t more comments centered around the potential of there being an enlightenment; rather than being filled with hyperboles…

    on a haiku being good or bad, i once read, “write down every haiku that comes to you, even the bad ones. it may inspire the next one which will surely be better”

    thanks jane

    morning mist-
    pink butterfly
    without her wings
    snugly in my arms

  3. Very original, very startling, would go down well at a reading or done at a performance poetry event.

    We often look along windows in a big block, or even in a small block of flats/apartments. In fact I did it two days ago and got startled by eye contact.

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