fogged window
inside your hand print
the shadow of mine
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Carla Sari
Carla Sari (pen name) was born in Italy and migrated to Australia in 1967. She has been writing short prose and poetry for a number of years. Her haiku and tanka have been published in six countries.
Email: carlasari at hotmail dot com
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intriguing!
greetings from foggy Denmark!
Almost always a sucker for shadow haiku. A hand within a hand will always get me too.
Haiku about shadow are alwyas evocative.Enjoyed it.
Is it just a Canadian prairie thing that foggy windows and handprints immediately had me parked in lovers’ lane ;-)?
A great Valentine’s haiku.
Carla,
_So many tangents to explore; I hope your not offended… as I ramble away from the clear romance of your words.
peering out
rain streaks the glass
cat attack
_M
judi, finding ourselves enarmoured, how many times has the “foggy window syndrome” resulted…
or was it the call of the wild
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pine fragrance
beneath a blue moon–
foggy windows
Hi Carla – how wonderful to see this evocative poem in my Inbox! i like it very much. it deserves to be shared with the world.
it’s heartening to see so many australian hakuists being represented internationally. goodonya, mate!
best wishes,
myron.
PS I never knew Carla Sari was your pen name!