sunrise…
the glint of light
on the coat hanger
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Aurora Antonovic
Aurora Antonovic is a Canadian writer, editor, and visual artist whose work has appeared over one thousand times in publications spanning eleven countries and five continents. She is a recent winner in the 2005 Tanka Splendor Awards, and a Pushcart Prize nominee. She is a member of The Bohemian Poet, a collective poet/artist group headed by Michael Ladanyi. View all posts by Aurora Antonovic
nice haiku, i enjoyed the subtle layers in this.
I like this, and it also seems to carry a bit of noir mystery almost? ;-)
Both sharp and suggestive. Well done, Aurora.
Clever.
Subtle. Nicely layered.
An evocative subtle haiku. Enjoyed it.
Aurora, I love this!
So many possibilities…
are you missing someone whose coat
used to hang there…
did you forget to pick up your coat from
the cleaners so you now face a chilly day…
or is it summer, and all your coats have been
packed away…
(and more, lol!)
:-)
Lary
wintry darkness–
avroy shlain “three eau”
lingers
on her pillow