daybreak-
the stars abandon
the moon
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Kala Ramesh
Kala Ramesh is a performing vocalist in Indian Classical music. Coming from an extremely artistic and culturally rich South Indian family, Kala believes -- as her father is fond of saying -- that "the soil has to be fertile for the plant to bloom" and feels that she owes this poetic streak in her to her mother. A proud mother of two young adults, Kala lives with her husband in Pune, India. View all posts by Kala Ramesh
Kaise ho, Kala,
_Your poem, caused me to recall. Thanks_!
_The native american Patuxet clan… believed each soul arrived and departed along the rising sun’s horizon. The Trail of Souls.
sunrise paints
this union of sea and sky
a trail of souls
_M
how is this a haiku? fool!
i enjoyed to read your daybreak-haiku, Kala!
beautiful haiku kala, a nice picture you have given us……
AP, how is this NOT a haiku? I think it is a very good one….
Lovely turn of phrase in the haiku, I appreciate the skill and care taken.
Hey AP, do you always act this rude or just in the presence of great poetry.
Very nice, Kala. I’m sure AP was being sarcastic?
Collin
twilight
stars unite
the moon so bright
Beautiful
This is a wonderful haiku. Terse and striking. Thanks for sharing with us all.
Hi Kala,
I love your unique way of viewing this…
a memorable haiku!
:-)
Lary
The subjective connotations of the sceen makes it memorable, Kala.
Dear haiku lovers,
Your encouraging words touch my heart and art
inspite of AP’s rude remark?! [ smiling]
Thanks a ton!
warmly,
kala
Lovely, Kala. After reading your bio, it made me think of you, the moon, and the stars your children. ‘Abandoned’ for a time, but always to return. This may not be at ALL what you had in mind, but thought I’d let you know where your words took me. Thanks for the journey.
the sunlit peak and moon in the darkened lake
kala
a thought provoking ku.
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it being said, “a person walking can stumble over the truth; though many arise, dusting themselves off, leave it there”
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a person can learn to read, yet unable to comprehend(ap)
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sunset
with a wink
stars out of hiding
from her hiding place, laughter-
spring night air
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kala
your ku(s) grant me access to your songs
thanks
Hi Susan
You took me on a journey too!
Martin,
I enjoyed your one liner!
Bob,
You hit the correct pitch here and I lapped up all your compliments!
Thanks,
kala