I started composing haiku last year inspired by the work of my American penpal. Ever since I have encountered and been impressed by so many beautiful English language haiku made by poets from all around the world. I feel very happy and honored to know as a Japanese this poem that originated in Japan is loved this much in the world.
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This haiku had quite an effect on me… very well done work, very japanese: thanks for sharing!
Truly enjoyed reading it!
But why is everyone calling it a haiku ?
I think it’s a senryu?
Of course not that it takes away any of the enjoyment either way!!!
This haiku had quite an effect on me… very well done work, very japanese: thanks for sharing!
Keiko, this makes me laugh quite inelegantly, but its strength is in its combination of humor and pathos.
Funny. Been there.
Another very individual haiku, and reminds me of Machi Tawara and her tanka.
Now when is your book coming out? ;-)
Ditto Bill’s comment. :)
_Ah… Keiko, so well pointed out, and such contrary truths in your words. From this side?
turning 65
I always laugh without…
the red tape
_M
great haiku. loved it. thanx for sharing.
fifty…
some snowy winters
today’s mint green leaves
in autumn
hahahahaha!
oh, oh, excuse me!
ha ha ha
Well done, Keiko.
I’m not trying to one-ups-men everyone,
but . . .
sometimes lonely
still I laugh
hug my memories
at eighty
Hi Keiko,
Truly enjoyed reading it!
But why is everyone calling it a haiku ?
I think it’s a senryu?
Of course not that it takes away any of the enjoyment either way!!!
kala
Keiko,
Great senryu! (for kala)
I love your poetry, and I also enjoyed your Shiki winner this month.
Collin
This is so delightful!
A touch of humor, and very
true-to-life…
keiko,
i thnik everyone misses your excellent haiku and senryu. this has always been my personal favorite. such an excellent excellent poem!
ed