summer springs — i try to scoop water with a straw hat Published by Gautam Nadkarni Gautam Nadkarni: g_nadkarni2003 at yahoo dot co dot in View all posts by Gautam Nadkarni
Hi Gautam, Let me be the first to congratulate you on your beautiful haiku! Great imagery! _kala Reply
I just love haiku for its brevity; and good haiku for its depth. You’ve achieved both here. Thanks for an experience. Hannah Reply
Hi Gautam,
Let me be the first to congratulate you on your beautiful haiku!
Great imagery!
_kala
Beautifully captures a timeless summer moment!
A summer moment, but also a moment for all seasons. An amazingly rich haiku.
I really like the many layers that appear with more readings.
This is delightful!
But it is also poignant…
I just love haiku for its brevity; and good haiku for its depth. You’ve achieved both here. Thanks for an experience.
Hannah
My heartfelt thanks to all of you who responded. Indeed, I am honoured.