Patricia has a weblog that contains ruminations and ramblings from retirement including original poetry, scifaiku, and haiku; ideas for working with dreams (e.g. The Tarot) and writing dream-based poems; and actual dream explorations. She can be reached at roswila at gmail dot com.
View all posts by Patricia Kelly
Nicely constructed. Line 3 has a real pop.
Thanks! It was fun to write … after choosing that “cool” screensaver image … in a heat wave … :-)
A favourite of mine, and I just can’t resist a haiku with snow in it! ;-)
Nicely observed! Excellent contrast between images.
~Megan
winter moon…
the palm trees sway
on my mouse pad
heat shimmer
a surfer’s silhouette
on the paper cup
heat wave
chill from the downed draft
crossroad pub
Love those haiku responses. Thanks!