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  1. We don’t call them trams where I come from, but that moon looks familiar. Sharp and evocative, origa.

  2. Oh, come on, Bill, a tram is a tram is a tram

    Origa, a lovely haiku and an experience we’ve all had at some time in our lives.

  3. Thank you for your comment, Bill! In Russia, they are trams — electric carriages on rails. And how do you call them? Yes, the moon looks familiar for sure! :)

  4. Thank you, everyone! I sent you responses individually, but they will appear on the page later — so just wanted to say that I appreciate your comments! :)

    Olga

  5. Great haiku!!! I love how you can picture anything with the few words you are allowed to use :-) More haiku like that, please.
    Alex.

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