sputnik satellite
a solar flare picks out
a rivet

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Alan Summers

Alan's haiku and poetry is published in over 60 anthologies, and a number of languages. He regularly reads, performs, and workshops from venues as diverse as possible including shop windows; inner city rainforests; cliff tops; to the more orthodox places...on occasion. His website is: http://www.withwords.org.uk Contact: alan at withwords dot org dot uk

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  1. Great work as always Alan. “Sputnik” is such a wonderful word and I love the way you’ve echoed it with “picks out” and “rivet” in contrast with the softness of “solar”.

    anniversary
    of Apollo 11–
    losing the remote

  2. …and Laika began to worry.
    Alan, You’ve painted this scene -my memory of searching for Sputnik, and imagining that ‘rivit’ a hundred times! _M

  3. Thanks for these comments and your own haiku. I’ve really enjoyed revisiting this page! ;-)

    deep space
    it seeps into
    my vertical bed

    Alan Summers,
    World Space Week
    Rocket Dreams commission (2007)

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