autumn twilight …
swan shapes separate
for the lone boatman
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Alan Summers
Alan's haiku and poetry is published in over 60 anthologies, and a number of languages. He regularly reads, performs, and workshops from venues as diverse as possible including shop windows; inner city rainforests; cliff tops; to the more orthodox places...on occasion. His website is: http://www.withwords.org.uk
Contact: alan at withwords dot org dot uk
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8 thoughts on “”
autumn twilight …
swan shapes separate
for the lone boatman
I love the way the lines resonate with each other.
Alan, This is a grand view of seasonal co-existance!
_These gentle swans swim aside, allowing the boatman to pass through. [Early spring? If there were -chicks- ‘twould be a different scene… their innate parental protection taking over.] _M
autumn twilight …
swan shapes separate
for the lone boatman
I love the way the lines resonate with each other.
Great work Alan.
_kala
Alan, This is a grand view of seasonal co-existance!
_These gentle swans swim aside, allowing the boatman to pass through. [Early spring? If there were -chicks- ‘twould be a different scene… their innate parental protection taking over.] _M
One of my favourites of yours Alan. A genuinely calming poem for a rushed Monday. Karen x
I love it… great work indeed!
Beautiful, Alan.
What a lovely mystical moment you have given us. Thank you.
autumn’s dawn
crossing darken mirrored lake–
solitary drake’s ripple
Lovely view, Alan…
wistful and haunting…as if there’s
an unspoken bond between them.
;)
Lary