filling the bird feeder–
snow finds the hole
in my mitten
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Claudette Russell
Claudette Russell is a retired high school English teacher who lives with her husband in Goodwin State Forest in Hampton, Connecticut. Her work has appeared in various print and online journals. She also collaborates with her husband to create haiga.
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full feeders
my sandles packed with snow
a bird perches
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I love haiku like these that can be read in several different ways. It’s gratifying to think of the snow acting to fill the feeder and to find the hole. Thank you for this!
full feeders
my sandles packed with snow
a bird perches
_m
Claudette,
I love haiku like these that can be read in several different ways. It’s gratifying to think of the snow acting to fill the feeder and to find the hole. Thank you for this!
Melissa
I enjoyed your haiku and agree with your choice of editing avoiding a pivot line.
Looking forward to more haiku from you! ;-)
blue sky
filling the space
between the fronds–
this jay