my heart
after the finish
still running
Published by
Grzegorz Sionkowski
Grzegorz (sionek) lives in Torun, Poland, and works as a chemist. His haiku in English have appeared in a few haiku journals (Simply Haiku, Frogpond, Haiku Harvest, The Heron's Nest, Asahi Haikuist Network, Mainichi Daily News) and anthologies (Euro-haiku, Crickets and Chrysanthemums). He is the inventor and administrator of the educational haiku forum gathering Polish poets who write haiku both in Polish and in English. Contact: gs at chem dot uni dot torun dot pl View all posts by Grzegorz Sionkowski
lovely ku. I empathize completely, as a pianist, after a concert piece, I take my seat in the audience and find my heart in my throat, pulse still racing.
Thank you for this…truly “spot on”!
And, just for fun…
hoofbeats
sudden thundering
old flame returns ~
heartburn
Grzegorz,
Your little poem reached my heart accurately!!!
Good one!
But pray… how do you pronounce your name. I thought Sanskrit names were tough…
warmly,
_kala
Thank you all.
I’m glad you like my ku.
Kala,
It is easy – say [J]e t’aime (I love you)
in French, then G[r]ego[r] in English,
and then replace [r] with [J] ;-)
best wishes,
Gregor
A very beautiful haiku!
Genuinely amusing and truly human.
I do respond to your ku, “sionek”
That adrenalin thrust takes over and sort of leaves you in an alien place. As a visual artist for fifty years, I’ve had my shares of those highs and lows. How fortunate we are to have that kind of excitement in our lives!
Welcome to tinywords.com and I hope I see more of your work! ;-)
szacun ;)
I feel out of breath just reading this…
very effective, Grzegorz! And it’s nice
to see you here!
;)
Lary
this is a cliche.
Pete,
If it is a cliche, you should have no problem to find
the websites/poems, where “running heart” means
not only “beating heart”, but also:
1) the heart taking part in the race,
2) the heart continuing the race,
3) the heart remembering the finished race
Find and enjoy them, as the readers above
enjoy my ku.
best wishes,
Gregor
my heart
continues this day…
at a less hectic pace