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  1. Liked it when I first read it, Bill, and I haven’t changed my mind. Nicely done and, as is often said, you make it sound so easy.

  2. Dear Bill, I am happy to read again this excellent poem.
    All of us have begun by staring at someone’s finger, more or less figuratively speaking…:)

  3. It’s one of those universal things that haiku can capture so perfectly.

    You have done this without embellishment, and its simplicity is breaktaking for that.

    It continues to resonate long after it’s read.

    Thanks for a lovely start to the day.

  4. I loved this image – so clear, so true, so gentle. I can feel the finger turning to point towards me as your bring me into your world. Thank you, Bill.

  5. Reminds me, years ago I pointed out the moon to a friend’s small child… days later he wanted to see the moon again… but that day the moon was not visable… he cried and cried because we couldn’t find it.

  6. bill, day after day after day… i’ve continually read the endless euphemism in vain responses; portraying professional courtesy, i’d guess, or possibly not knowing better?
    FINALLY, i’m reading something worthy of each praise.

    good job, bill

    having said all this, rather than use stares, had you considered gapes, or gawks–

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