all are in a hurry – in the beggar’s hand only the rain Published by Jordi Climent Jordi Climent, jclimentb at gmail dot com View all posts by Jordi Climent
I like the uninvolved simplicity of this. [a tanka of mine:] after i pray my hands fall open like a beggar’s at worst the sky will give rain Reply
evening commute– in a rush white ibis flock veers off – things one sees when traffic slows; specially low flying birds attempting to cross the freeway… Reply
The picture is so clear yet provides a great opportunity to question our daily lives and activities. Reply
Buen trabajo, Jordi.
gotas gordas—
modedas en la lata
del mendigo
el mendigo
vuelve a bajar la mano –
atardecer
saludos
Wow! moving, mind opening, pointed
I like the uninvolved simplicity of this. [a tanka of mine:]
after i pray
my hands fall open
like a beggar’s
at worst the sky
will give rain
Wow…
this one is really a great haiku
Beautiful, with a subtle political statement. Thank you for sharing this.
evening commute–
in a rush
white ibis flock
veers off
–
things one sees when traffic slows; specially low flying birds attempting to cross the freeway…
The picture is so clear yet provides a great opportunity to question our daily lives and activities.
Really good
Another one from me
beggars
outstretched hands
trickle down effect
Manu Kant