Thank you very much for your beautiful poems and your kind words.
My merit is very small. My thanks and gratitude go to my neighbours, the mountains, my faithful friend, the wind, to you, my friends, who guide and inspire my work, and to our editor, Dylan Tweney.
Nicely done, Dana-Maria !
…and the evening candle flutters. _m
Very atmospheric. Beautifully subtle “sound image” as well as being a “visual image”.
roots__
searching for moisture
between the cracks
cold as stone
the spring wind
~ ~ blows ~ ~
stone wall –
the spring wind fills
all the cracks
Wonderful poem, Dana Maria. Tactile, almost synaesthetic.
the verb (fills) works very well in this haiku!
well done!
Visual,
tangible, in some way…
beautiful.
Good work, rings the senses: acoustic, kinesthetic, thermal.
Terrific haiku… the kind that stays with you over the course of the day.
Dana-Maria, how wonderful to see you here,
and to enjoy this lovely moment!
;)
Lary
Beautiful indeed!
Every deed we do filled
With talented word!
Superb, Dana-Maria.
this is an EXCELLENT haiku. really captures spring and exudes freshness.
g’day
I love this! Having recently returned from Ireland I am enamoured with stone walls.
Peace and Love
march winds whipping
trees into a frenzy–
my shadow bracing the wall
Good one! I love when your haiku turn up on this site. :)
Dear friends,
Thank you very much for your beautiful poems and your kind words.
My merit is very small. My thanks and gratitude go to my neighbours, the mountains, my faithful friend, the wind, to you, my friends, who guide and inspire my work, and to our editor, Dylan Tweney.
Dana-Maria
A memorable haiku,Dana.Thank you.