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  1. wow, i really appreciate ayaz daryl nielsen’s haiku (as i do most all of tinywords choices)! party on, dude! –
    ayaz daryl nielsen

  2. ayaz, it happens.
    from the land of “lightning capital of the world”, i’ve seen strikes causing mere mortals to stutter, along with taking ones breath away; even on a clear sunny day. for the (haikuist), your searing words conjure up that, all too familiar, statuesque awe.

    lightning
    this instant eternity–
    less i forget there is a GOD

  3. what is the mailing address of bear creek haiku? i’ve never heard of it, & would
    like to send some poems.

    your haiku is real good ayaz.

    toby

  4. I like it a lot. I re-experienced wonderful storms while reading it–ah yes! the purpose of poetry some would say.

  5. ayaz,

    I loved your inference of the storm’s power and how it effected the area…”the street lights stuttered…”

    Trees and signs flocked white
    While hard lakes thaw for Summer.
    Merging of seasons

  6. toby, and just bear creek haiku will also take you to an online site – SASE, poetry of 15 lines or less, always seeking poetry for consideration, about 6 issues a year

  7. daryl,
    miss getting bch. is it still happening?
    hope you & yours are well & thriving.
    will send a submission soon.would have sent this via email but i have no idea what your email address is.
    ed

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