Michelle, What a beautiful Haiku! You have a
strong poetic spirit to find beauty even
when extremely fatigued. I imagine writing
Haiku is a good release from what must be
a sometimes exhausting but very rewarding
work. Helen Kinsella
silent peepers
spring stars in full bloom
then comes the squeal
–
doctor michelle, really really late here, and really exhausted from the flu; your haiku, causal and effecting a smile, in spite of this burning fever, reminded me of spring’s arrival; even in the land of perennial sunshine…
You give a good example of the benefit of writing poems especially haiku: becoming more observant of our surroundings and happenings. We are cameras snapping that instant realization.
wet t-shirt
neighbors stare
washing the car
garden dampness
on the convertible windshield
peepers take a ride
Michelle, What a beautiful Haiku! You have a
strong poetic spirit to find beauty even
when extremely fatigued. I imagine writing
Haiku is a good release from what must be
a sometimes exhausting but very rewarding
work. Helen Kinsella
Convertibles and changing of the seasons…I like it.
Trees and signs flocked white
While hard lakes thaw for Summer.
Merging of seasons
silent peepers
spring stars in full bloom
then comes the squeal
–
doctor michelle, really really late here, and really exhausted from the flu; your haiku, causal and effecting a smile, in spite of this burning fever, reminded me of spring’s arrival; even in the land of perennial sunshine…
i must be healing, as the words again flow
sentencing day
the peeping tom’s
wandering eye
– Current key
I go on writting
at the moon light
– A few syllabes
a thin haiku
like a sword blade
’bout time we have some spring peepers, perhaps this poem will enhance their arrival
Transit lounge…..
Not a sound but spinning wheels.
I have just returned to Perth, Western Australia from Las Vegas and Toronto. It’s nice to be home, where it is autumn for us.
spring peepers
searching the internet
there’s a picture
let us move on:
year round beepers
cell phones wait for no one
dis concert cut short
You give a good example of the benefit of writing poems especially haiku: becoming more observant of our surroundings and happenings. We are cameras snapping that instant realization.