into the night a cuckoo returns the call
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Kala Ramesh
Kala Ramesh is a performing vocalist in Indian Classical music. Coming from an extremely artistic and culturally rich South Indian family, Kala believes -- as her father is fond of saying -- that "the soil has to be fertile for the plant to bloom" and feels that she owes this poetic streak in her to her mother. A proud mother of two young adults, Kala lives with her husband in Pune, India. View all posts by Kala Ramesh
I love the way this reverses direction. A great use of the one-line format.
a very worthy creation
Nice one Kala_! An echo.
midnight…
a bird answers my clock
_m
yeah! a good haiku!
it works as a one-liner!
Hi, very fine!
waiting for an answer
the petals of blossoms
fall day by day…
very nice Kala.
g’day Kala
I love this!
My nights are exactly that.
Peace and Love
B
Beutiful thought provoking one line haiku,dear kala.
Very atmospheric!
Thanks a ton !
This is my first one-line that was published and it has a special corner in my heart!
I’m so happy you could all relate to it.
warmly,
_kala
A beautiful one liner, Kala, that says it so well.
Fascinating, Kala
cool dark silence
through the window of my study–
this coo
“into the night” encompases so many meanings and opens up a sense of direction – even into infinity. Your haiku expertly sends the message – like an arrow hitting the bullseye.
It seems so good reading all these comments after so many years. Thanks Dylan
_kala