my son and i
counting fireflies
counting stars

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Roberta Beary

Roberta Beary lives in Mayo, Ireland. Their work appears in Tiny Love Stories: True Tales of Love in 100 Words or Less (New York Times, 2020) and One Breath: Notes from the Reluctant Engagement Project (Doire Press/ Clan Beo, 2021) which pairs their haiku with artwork by families of people with disabilities.

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  1. starry night the darkness between fireflies

    [Published in Acorn]

    I love your stars and fireflies, Roberta.

  2. Beautiful haiku. First You count something, what is near You, something countable – then You start to count something further – endless and eternal. Great haiku about growing up and seeing more and more together.

  3. moments that are breeding a constant assurance of counting on each other – whenever, whatever, whereever. Words well-written.

  4. This is a fun haiku that reminded me of a camping trip, long ago. Please excuse my use of your work!

    My kids and I count
    Fireflies or shooting stars,
    We’re not sure which.

  5. my daughter’s late night phone call…
    the rumbling of thunder

    …and over the years, i continue to soothe her fears

  6. Here, here Alan – congratulations Roberta! Your work is consistently distinctive and beautiful – always a joy to read, and well worthy of the recognition.

  7. Many thanks to all for your comments. My son was almost 11 when I wrote this haiku; he will turn 20 later this summer. I am lucky that every so often we still count fireflies.

    Alan and Helen, thanks for your congratulations on the PSA’s William Carlos Williams finalist award for “The Unworn Necklace” which I am happy to say includes this haiku.

  8. bare feet patter
    across this dampened grass
    the child laughs

    > and that -child- could be in us -all- < _m

  9. >Continue the renga; the flowers that bloom in the dark.< night blooms these moonflies gather a new day _m

  10. _m, your words remind me of those i’ve shared with that special lady…

    pure rose
    in full bloom–
    rivals this driven snow

    &

    porcelain flower-
    this summer night
    your heady fragrance

    what one does with tiny words, beneath the moonrise in summer(winter, down under)

  11. Äî ñâèäàíèÿ, auf wiedersehen, tot ziens, farvel, hejdá, au revoir, adios, arrivederci, lehitraot, adios, kwa heri, adeus, sayonara, itte kimasu, itte irasshai, shubho bidai, nomoskaar, rabb raakhaa, bandagi, salóm, khoda hafez, ta-ta, abar dyakha habe, namasté…

    magyar, these nights, i simply say “until”…

    last light…
    this half-closed red rose
    her silhouette remains

  12. The abundance of ‘so-longs’ seems ominous.

    moonlight breeze…
    this rose silhouette
    in shadow’s dance

    > until < _m

  13. For anyone having withdrawal symptoms, there’s another great daily haiku site @ tobaccoroadpoet dot com. Also check out the blog’s “three questions”.

  14. magyar, “so long” does have this inauspicious presage; repressed until the dawning of dusk, once more…

    this light fades with dawn
    beneath the drooping leaf…
    firefly in repose

    ahhh, jennifer c, these are the times within tinywords absence, thoughts become symbiotic to (tiny steps); withdrawal symptoms, far from it.

  15. this scene would make a nice lead in to a country time lemonade commercial, it’s
    quaint & anachronistic.

  16. wink,
    your words exposed yatsuka ishihara’s views on the haiku; at least one in particular, “anachronistic”(anachronism). these days, i ponder how many students, even masters of the haiku(hokku) & etc, clearly understand the “anachronistic haiku”….

    ;-)

  17. bob,
    good to see you saw the upside of my comment.
    was a bit concerned that it might be taken as a closet insult which it was never intended to be.

    that being said however, i do find it to be unbelievably quaint that in this age of game boys & i pods a mother & son would actually count fireflies…

    satellite dish
    we haven’t seen the stars
    in months

    wink

  18. also, for anyone who might not already know, Roberta’s work is being highlighted on the Mann library’s daily haiku site for July. check it out @ haiku dot mannlib dot cornell dot edu

    p.s. nice one wink!

  19. firefly
    along my path
    alone

    wink, more of an enlightenment; what many overlooked, or may not have been aware of, you provided this deeper read to roberta’s haiku

    cultural & philosophical movements of the 17th & 18th centuries(enlightenment age) sprang to mind

    cicada
    accompanying the star-spangled banner–
    directv

    for some, dishnet, cable, even rabbit ears…

  20. I really like your haiku magyar!

    Gorgeous use of sound in the third line which feels like a pivot line as well. Very well crafted.

    Just needs ‘de-typoing’

    fireflies
    this soft night’s rain
    pfsst pfsst pfsst

    You should send it to Tinywords submissions! ;-)

  21. fireflys
    this soft nights rain
    pfsst pfsst pfsst
    _

    magyar, i see the purpose and reasoning behind “fireflys, and nights”.

    even:

    fireflysss
    this soft nightsss rain
    pfsst pfsst pfsst

    would have worked for me

    artistic license allowsss one thisss latitude, the ignoring of the conventional; ssspecially in grammar…

  22. _Ahhhh yes, Alan and Bob, the -S- just flies to the end of fly, and the missing punctuation is quite simply, missing.
    _I am truly honored by your kind comments, and to you both… I offer my appreciation.
    _m

  23. magyar,
    yet, another representation of “_m”, modesty; these days, a rare and fleeting attribute. _m, continue your quality writes.

    fireflies winking
    this summer eve…
    in the midst of sparkling stars

  24. if this is the end of tinywords, these comments should end as they began with
    bob richardson providing the last comment or better yet a eulogy.

    popeye without olove oyl, fred without barney, pixie without dixie, in retrospect, that’s what tinywords would have been without bob.

    zip collins

  25. Haiku in tiny words brings heartfull of
    peaceful atmosphere.

    Firefly enchanting me
    Like oasis in the desert…
    while browsing tiny word!

    –ka na kalyanasundaram,cheyyar,tn,india

  26. _m, reflecting on counting snowflakes, the thought of raindrops came to mind.

    rainfall pratter-
    counting each drop
    along with each sheep

  27. .
    lovely firefly poem –
    hopefully not the last
    on tiny words

    .
    trillions of stars
    many have planets
    – some host life

    lulu.com/USpace
    .

  28. “time with dad
    potato salad
    on the headstone”

    Mike, that’s one of the most beautiful collection of words I’ve ever written in my life. The familiarity of ‘dad’, combined with the reference to a favourite food, makes the pivot all the more shocking on line 3. After the shock, though, the first two lines become all the more touching for the sense of familiarity. This one will stay with me. x

  29. Re: Above post – I meant to say that’s one of the most beautiful collections of words I’ve ever *read* in my life. Not written. Haikus I’ve written wouldn’t nearly compare to that. My most recent was:

    Vibrant like leaves,
    her autumn clothes will warm her,
    as she warms my heart.

  30. countless stars
    the toddler’s finger
    in the same sky

    ground blizzard
    we exchange stares
    by flashlight

  31. fresh haiku
    delivered daily…
    a fourth glass

    In my humble opinion, these daily haiku/senryu are, fresh. _m

  32. wood pile
    still visible in snow
    my neighbor’s footsteps

    winter concussion
    i feel the cold
    in all these stars

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