real estate sales pitch —
a tangle of butterflies
in the horse pasture

Published by

Charles Trumbull

Charles Trumbull is an editor for Encyclopaedia Britannica and lives in Evanston, Illinois. He has been writing haiku since 1991. He was editor (1996-2002) of the Haiku Society of America Newsletter, president of the HSA in 2004 and 2005, and an organizer of the Haiku North America 1999 conference. He is currently editor of Modern Haiku and proprietor of Deep North Press, a publisher of haiku books. No Web page yet; e-mail: trumbullc at comcast dot net

56 thoughts on “”

  1. This has a wonderful texture of inter-relationship and economy. Very nice, Charles–outstanding in your field. Take care.

  2. **a tangle of butterflies in the horse pasture** — fresh and haunting image, and I like the interesting and completely unexpected juxtaposition in this haiku.

  3. I wish Dylan would open Tinywords back up again. In the meantime I hope he’ll let us post on this old haiku of Charles’.

    red coals
    she persuades me
    to stay in bed

  4. _m, being reminded of past great works, and my having experienced the moment. i know what the masses thought of basho’s work, during his lifetime…

    winter’s dawn
    white ibis left
    calico ducks right
    flock together

    HAPPY NEW YEAR

  5. Mike Farley,
    Your last two haiku on this date are so relaxing, comforting and thought provoking to me. The aroma of the chimney smoke coupled with moon inspired introspection seem required for 2009 resolution planning and personal evaluation.

  6. terrytip, was pondering how many ku-ist, with pen in hand, even mind in awe, were viewing this, once in a lifetime, perigee moon

    mike f, this moon’s to make a new man

    ahh, 2emptychairs, all is not void

    through this cloud
    full iridaceous moon–
    through my bedroom window

  7. … and the list continues to grow. WOW

    interesting mike f., i’m not the only one confronted with sunrise, commuter traffic, and visions of haiku.

    midday commute
    speeds along–
    red head turkey vulture spirals above

    not only in denmark, miami too; funny, only in winter.
    hamlet act 1, scene 4

  8. flight cross furrowed field
    tangle of butterflies–
    orange ribbon in her hair

    into waiting arms…
    swayed by my sales pitch

  9. reminisce, days past

    “a real estate sales pitch
    braving a chilly wind
    one moment for stolen kisses
    this childless couple
    on the edge of a salt marsh
    hearing the ripples split the pickerel weed
    a rainy day, too
    the pause
    imagining a model home
    where once was a prairie sunset
    an amber light
    through breaking clouds, first sun in days
    opposite a pale moon
    now, a spring sunset”

Your response: