October chill the silence in this shadow
—martin gottlieb cohen
Issue 10.3 | 12 October 2010
Good to see you here again Martin.
Simple two liner, your speciality, which resonate the more you read it.
Alan
Thank you posting this. Wonderful expression of fall~!
two is better tho i long for one
…but one gets lonely.
October light, the chill in the sunshine.
october chill no football, no short pants
october chill blanket over my feet
change
blanket over cold feet
october chill kids all at school
october rain like winter
october chill more rain today
Thanks everyone for your comments and poems. This site is better than ever. It is good to be here to watch this idea thrive.
And see your haiku here too!
Summer light ebbs. Autumn evening begins to fall.
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October 12th, 2010 at 3:00 pm
Good to see you here again Martin.
Simple two liner, your speciality, which resonate the more you read it.
Alan
October 12th, 2010 at 3:09 pm
Thank you posting this. Wonderful expression of fall~!
October 12th, 2010 at 5:32 pm
two is better tho i long for one
July 31st, 2013 at 7:10 pm
…but one gets lonely.
October 12th, 2010 at 9:02 pm
October light,
the chill in the sunshine.
October 13th, 2010 at 7:57 am
october
chill
no football, no short pants
October 13th, 2010 at 7:59 am
october
chill
blanket over my feet
October 13th, 2010 at 8:01 am
change
blanket over cold feet
October 13th, 2010 at 8:02 am
october
chill
kids all at school
October 13th, 2010 at 8:04 am
october
rain
like winter
October 13th, 2010 at 8:08 am
october
chill
more rain today
October 13th, 2010 at 3:57 pm
Thanks everyone for your comments and poems. This site is better than ever. It is good to be here to watch this idea thrive.
October 13th, 2010 at 4:29 pm
And see your haiku here too!
Alan
October 17th, 2010 at 2:44 pm
Summer light ebbs.
Autumn evening
begins to fall.