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Lovely, this is a wonderful poem, Ed! – Raquel Bailey
You've done it again, Ed. Great visual!!
Great topical poem! The concrete aspect of the five birds in flight is perfect. Too bad it doesn't come through in the emailed version.
Fabulous concrete haiku. Thanks for sharing, Ed. – C2
Good current concrete poem/haiku! ;-)
Alan, With Words
Ed! I loved this poem whatever form it is. Great imagination, feel free to send some of your works to me-I run 4 poetry websites. Michael Lee Johnson, Itasca, IL. http://poetryman.mysite.com/ promomanusa@gmail.com.
Hi Ed – wonderful haiku.
Great haiku! It's visually stunning .with a depressing theme. You and David Lean.
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recession blues….
Echoes of a
suburban dream
bounce off a forest
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foreclosure signs.
I really like this and the imagery is really good.-Sam Sutlive.