I am finding this one hard to place myself in. Are the villages really that close that you can hear roosters crowing from them? It would seem more realistic to me to say "house to house" or "street to street"?
Especially a small European country such as the Netherlands. The author's details:
Bouwe Brouwer
33 year old teacher from Emmeloord, the Netherlands. Interested in writing haiku, travelling and designing/fabricating small haiku books by hand: http://www.deoudezeeman.web-log.nl
When we arrange conference on the international level then the most common dialogue of the people is they are one and work for the benefits of each other despite to their religion and are not ready to discuss their religion either.
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October 14th, 2010 at 2:02 am
alarm clock–
from the aerie, kites clamor
for an early mouse
October 14th, 2010 at 10:53 am
Before dawn
roost crows to rooster
from village to village.
October 14th, 2010 at 3:02 pm
Nice one.
October 14th, 2010 at 4:57 pm
I am finding this one hard to place myself in. Are the villages really that close that you can hear roosters crowing from them? It would seem more realistic to me to say "house to house" or "street to street"?
October 15th, 2010 at 5:19 pm
I understand what you say, but some villages can be that close, plus if low sound pollution from human appliances, they can really carry. Honest. ;-)
October 15th, 2010 at 5:21 pm
Especially a small European country such as the Netherlands. The author's details:
Bouwe Brouwer
33 year old teacher from Emmeloord, the Netherlands. Interested in writing haiku, travelling and designing/fabricating small haiku books by hand: http://www.deoudezeeman.web-log.nl
Website: http://www.deoudezeeman.web-log.nl
October 15th, 2010 at 11:21 pm
Each village–no matter how many and how far separated–experience the crow of their own rooster … a universal image of early rising. A very nice haiku.
November 15th, 2010 at 1:21 am
Sunrise
On village in houses
Cocks shout
May 2nd, 2015 at 3:41 am
When we arrange conference on the international level then the most common dialogue of the people is they are one and work for the benefits of each other despite to their religion and are not ready to discuss their religion either.
October 19th, 2015 at 10:53 pm
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