night sky the rusted tin roof leaking moonlight
1st Place, Shiki Monthly Kukai, April 2008 Published in white lies: The Red Moon Anthology 2008
—Melissa Spurr
Issue 11.1 | 23 February 2011
you made my day… I mean my night
Beautiful,as always, Melissa. I hope you are well
Thank you, Johnny (great to see you!) and Robert. :-)
A great haiku Melissa!
perfect….
ticking keeping its own time the tin roof
Alan Summers
Publications credits: Hobo, march 96; Blithe Spirit Vol. 8 No. 1 (1998 Review); Micropress: best poems Ed. Kate O'Neill, (Micropress NZ 1997); sundog haiku journal: an australian year (sunfast press 1997 reprinted 1998)
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February 23rd, 2011 at 2:31 pm
you made my day… I mean my night
February 23rd, 2011 at 2:39 pm
Beautiful,as always, Melissa. I hope you are well
February 23rd, 2011 at 10:05 pm
Thank you, Johnny (great to see you!) and Robert. :-)
February 24th, 2011 at 6:27 am
A great haiku Melissa!
February 24th, 2011 at 6:47 pm
perfect….
March 16th, 2011 at 5:20 pm
ticking
keeping its own time
the tin roof
Alan Summers
Publications credits:
Hobo, march 96; Blithe Spirit Vol. 8 No. 1 (1998 Review); Micropress: best poems Ed. Kate O'Neill, (Micropress NZ 1997); sundog haiku journal: an australian year (sunfast press 1997 reprinted 1998)