perched at the tip of summer red-winged blackbird
—Melissa Allen
Issue 11.2 | 4 August 2011
Love your blackbird, Melissa…
Marvelous
I loved your poem Write on Chenn45@aol.com
saw this in my reader and thought (this sounds like melissa allen) and well, :D
yes
I love it!
I love how "perched" is perched right up there on top of your poem. Nice image!
Beautiful!
Love it!
Alan
Hum, the summer of the rabbit year… Love yours, anyway !
perched … the cock-a-doodle-does of their voting calls
swallows parched on the whitewashed doom of newly built mosque
?? 4:29 pmmohsen ??????:ghable ezedvajam moshaver be man goft ke ba in case ke dar nazar dari ezdevaj nakon va alan afsoos mikhoram ke chera be harfesh gush nakardam va alan bad az 2 sal zendegie msohtarak daram az ahmsaram joda misham
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August 4th, 2011 at 4:11 am
Love your blackbird, Melissa…
August 4th, 2011 at 4:48 am
Marvelous
August 4th, 2011 at 5:11 am
I loved your poem
Write on
Chenn45@aol.com
August 4th, 2011 at 7:15 am
saw this in my reader and thought (this sounds like melissa allen) and well, :D
August 4th, 2011 at 9:54 am
yes
August 4th, 2011 at 3:39 pm
I love it!
August 4th, 2011 at 4:15 pm
I love how "perched" is perched right up there on top of your poem. Nice image!
August 4th, 2011 at 11:57 pm
Beautiful!
August 11th, 2011 at 5:27 pm
Love it!
Alan
August 27th, 2011 at 10:42 am
Hum, the summer of the rabbit year… Love yours, anyway !
perched
…
the cock-a-doodle-does
of their
voting calls
September 24th, 2011 at 12:35 pm
swallows parched
on the whitewashed doom
of newly built mosque
October 25th, 2015 at 11:20 am
?? 4:29 pmmohsen ??????:ghable ezedvajam moshaver be man goft ke ba in case ke dar nazar dari ezdevaj nakon va alan afsoos mikhoram ke chera be harfesh gush nakardam va alan bad az 2 sal zendegie msohtarak daram az ahmsaram joda misham