We can envision the loving companionship and repartee that develops when two people share a favorite pastime; the child (however young or old) and onlooker become a part of the moment as well. The intimacy is sweetly and simply expressed.
Thank you. Lovely. I live in a retirement community and there's one couple that's been married for longer than I've been alive. I get this feeling when in their presence.
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August 18th, 2011 at 10:37 am
We can envision the loving companionship and repartee that develops when two people share a favorite pastime; the child (however young or old) and onlooker become a part of the moment as well. The intimacy is sweetly and simply expressed.
August 18th, 2011 at 11:57 am
years after
their passings
here and there
another piece
falls into place
August 18th, 2011 at 11:59 am
sudoku puzzle
three times fist to my stomach
this baby can't count
August 18th, 2011 at 12:01 pm
Thank you. Lovely. I live in a retirement community and there's one couple that's been married for longer than I've been alive. I get this feeling when in their presence.
August 18th, 2011 at 12:05 pm
one down
Jean
I couldn't help thinking of this when I read your lovely verse.
August 18th, 2011 at 12:34 pm
Thank you all for these beautiful comments.
August 18th, 2011 at 10:35 pm
Very nice. A nice image, with depth of meaning. Works on many levels.
August 19th, 2011 at 2:00 am
Beautiful!!
August 22nd, 2011 at 5:39 pm
Heartwarming . . . with great assonance and consonance.
September 1st, 2011 at 6:55 pm
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September 21st, 2011 at 2:37 am
lovely these feelings of yours need no words
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