the skip of a skipping stone alpine swifts

5 Responses

  1. Alan Summers Says:

    Wow! Another stunning haiku by John Barlow.

    Alan

  2. snowbirdpress Says:

    dusk across the water nesting birds

    It's great to find John here in my in-box tonight. Merrill

  3. Helen Buckingham Says:

    I love the 'skipping' rhythm to this – a joyous poem.

  4. @Jon_Summers Says:

    Brilliant, well done!

  5. @andreochka Says:

    Love the rhythmical movement in it…. brilliant!

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