orion my mind back at the source of words
—Dietmar Tauchner
Issue 13.2 | 23 August 2013
camping accident… Orion offers his belt as a tourniquet
I dig the imaginative and whimsical quality of this haiku, BB. Nice one.
Great sense of the depth of thought.
Terrific couple of lines to back up the first line. Highly memorable.
Alan
Wow. Profound and cosmic, Dietmar. Very powerful.
The source of words, poetry, and the sense of space – really enjoyed this.
Wow, indeed! I now know I need to have my eyes tested as I read this as 'onion' until I noticed the comments about space and the cosmos – well, it made sense to me, in terms of peeling back layers.
But it is even better as 'orion', Dietmar! :)
marion
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August 23rd, 2013 at 3:21 pm
camping accident…
Orion offers his belt
as a tourniquet
August 24th, 2013 at 1:54 pm
I dig the imaginative and whimsical quality of this haiku, BB. Nice one.
August 23rd, 2013 at 4:48 pm
Great sense of the depth of thought.
August 24th, 2013 at 6:38 am
Terrific couple of lines to back up the first line. Highly memorable.
Alan
August 24th, 2013 at 1:56 pm
Wow. Profound and cosmic, Dietmar. Very powerful.
August 25th, 2013 at 5:15 pm
The source of words, poetry, and the sense of space – really enjoyed this.
August 30th, 2013 at 12:53 am
Wow, indeed! I now know I need to have my eyes tested as I read this as 'onion' until I noticed the comments about space and the cosmos – well, it made sense to me, in terms of peeling back layers.
But it is even better as 'orion', Dietmar! :)
marion