dry well I haul up a bucket filled with summer
—Sanjuktaa
Issue 13.2 | 6 September 2013
Dear Sanjuktaa,
Wonderful haiku.
hosta flowers begin to end yet knowing their leaves will turn gold
Ellen
Dear Ellen, what a beautiful response! Thank you so much!
Dipping the well for a bucket of fragrance
Thanks a bunch, Madhuri!
Lovely Sanjuktaa . . . _kala
So glad you liked it, Kala! Thanks a ton!
Very dreamy & nice!
late summer slicing into the last watermelon
Really love this one!
T.Johnson…thanks a lot!
A haiku that will cherish quench poetic thirst! Congratulation Sanjuktaa
Thank you so much for your kind words, Pravat.
Wonderful!
Thanks a lot, Dick!
"bucket filled with summer" ! – lovely!
Thanks a lot, Anitha! Am so happy you liked!
Very evocative, late summer poem, just lovely.
Thanks a lot for stopping by and commenting, Alison!
Beautifully done, Sanjuktaa!. Indian Summer depicted nicely.
Thank you so much, Ramesh! Really happy that you liked.
Beauty of language depicting a grim reality. The well is dry and summer is hot. And the bucket . . . I find this quite startling. Congratulations.
Many thanks, Jan Dobb. Loved the way you interpreted it!
What a lovely response that is, Dawn! Thanks a bunch!
lovely verse,the reality of summer coming home !….
Arvinder, thanks so much!
Aaaaahhhhh – wonderful! :)
marion
Thanks so much, Marion.
frozen well In the fallen bucket a star
.
summer haze- a sax player on the corner billing pigeons
Alan Summers Publications credits: Azami #40 (Japan, 1997)
Thank you all for your kind words and wonderful responses!
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September 6th, 2013 at 2:03 pm
Dear Sanjuktaa,
Wonderful haiku.
hosta flowers
begin to end
yet knowing
their leaves
will turn gold
Ellen
September 6th, 2013 at 11:55 pm
Dear Ellen, what a beautiful response! Thank you so much!
September 6th, 2013 at 2:13 pm
Dipping the well for a bucket of fragrance
September 7th, 2013 at 3:08 am
Thanks a bunch, Madhuri!
September 6th, 2013 at 6:03 pm
Lovely Sanjuktaa . . .
_kala
September 6th, 2013 at 11:56 pm
So glad you liked it, Kala! Thanks a ton!
September 6th, 2013 at 6:07 pm
Very dreamy & nice!
late summer
slicing into the last
watermelon
September 6th, 2013 at 6:32 pm
Really love this one!
September 7th, 2013 at 12:02 am
T.Johnson…thanks a lot!
September 6th, 2013 at 7:28 pm
A haiku that will cherish quench poetic thirst! Congratulation Sanjuktaa
September 7th, 2013 at 12:01 am
Thank you so much for your kind words, Pravat.
September 6th, 2013 at 8:55 pm
Wonderful!
September 7th, 2013 at 3:04 am
Thanks a lot, Dick!
September 6th, 2013 at 10:01 pm
"bucket filled with summer" ! – lovely!
September 6th, 2013 at 11:58 pm
Thanks a lot, Anitha! Am so happy you liked!
September 6th, 2013 at 10:36 pm
Very evocative, late summer poem, just lovely.
September 7th, 2013 at 12:00 am
Thanks a lot for stopping by and commenting, Alison!
September 6th, 2013 at 10:57 pm
Beautifully done, Sanjuktaa!. Indian Summer depicted nicely.
September 6th, 2013 at 11:59 pm
Thank you so much, Ramesh! Really happy that you liked.
September 6th, 2013 at 11:31 pm
Beauty of language depicting a grim reality. The well is dry and summer is hot. And the bucket . . . I find this quite startling. Congratulations.
September 7th, 2013 at 3:03 am
Many thanks, Jan Dobb. Loved the way you interpreted it!
September 7th, 2013 at 12:03 am
What a lovely response that is, Dawn! Thanks a bunch!
September 7th, 2013 at 8:36 am
lovely verse,the reality of summer coming home !….
September 12th, 2013 at 6:44 am
Arvinder, thanks so much!
September 9th, 2013 at 4:02 am
Aaaaahhhhh – wonderful! :)
marion
September 11th, 2013 at 11:44 pm
Thanks so much, Marion.
September 9th, 2013 at 9:11 pm
frozen well
In the fallen bucket
a star
September 10th, 2013 at 10:27 am
.
summer haze-
a sax player on the corner
billing pigeons
Alan Summers
Publications credits: Azami #40 (Japan, 1997)
September 12th, 2013 at 6:43 am
Thank you all for your kind words and wonderful responses!