writing a haiku the bottom drops out
—Robert Epstein
Issue 14.1 | 11 June 2014
Wonderful wordsmithing and visual/concrete haiku and could feel it in my breath and stomach!
Beautiful constructed haiku.
first winning haiku shroud her last smile
Yes, this is exquisite. I love haiku that use the word "haiku," but I've never been able to write one myself that I feel is authentic. Yours, Robert, is authentic and…well, as I said, exquisite.
very nice
LOL
Love it! :)
writer's block once again, our cat walks through my haiku
I guess so…
tree ice
sun light inches down the bed room chair
It might as well be comfortable.
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June 11th, 2014 at 9:40 am
Wonderful wordsmithing and visual/concrete haiku and could feel it in my breath and stomach!
June 11th, 2014 at 9:42 am
Beautiful constructed haiku.
first
winning
haiku
shroud
her
last
smile
June 11th, 2014 at 11:22 am
Yes, this is exquisite. I love haiku that use the word "haiku," but I've never been able to write one myself that I feel is authentic. Yours, Robert, is authentic and…well, as I said, exquisite.
June 15th, 2014 at 5:10 pm
very nice
June 16th, 2014 at 10:33 pm
LOL
June 24th, 2014 at 8:29 am
Love it! :)
writer's block
once again, our cat walks through
my haiku
September 7th, 2020 at 9:39 am
I guess so…
tree
ice
sun
light
inches
down
the
bed
room
chair
September 7th, 2020 at 9:44 am
It might as well be comfortable.