slowly falling snow
little by little I learn
to forget you
(originally appeared in White Lotus, Issue 6, 2008)
Issue 15.1 | 11 February 2015
Beautiful, soulful, speaks to my heart.
Lovely ku, Sylvia :-)
It is hard work to un-commit yourself. You have to prepare the way for a re-commitment. It’s the only way to authenticate your love.
Feeling through image. Beautifully done.
The heart has its fast beast, and its slow underlying rhythms. It won't be hurried. Snow a deceptive blanket, leaving painful things covered?
I love the passage of time here.
a flink of cows
the blue before a night
of falling snow
N.B. Twelve cows are called a flink
Blithe Spirit 2014
falling snow moon
the slowness of shadows
caught in branches
Ryōan-ji sequence pub. Presence #47 (2012)
the snow gathering
bits of moon
Hedgerow: a journal of small poems (Issue 1, September 2014)
Lovely to be able to revisit your exquisitely beautiful haiku:
we rise to
Beautiful and poignant! Very nicely done.
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