'
interrupting
my self-criticism —
a cardinal
chirrups
for her mate
—MARILYN SHOEMAKER HAZELTON
.
Wonderful use of juxataposition, those first two lines (I'm a Virgo) are so grounded, and then to change to birdsong, which can stun us into getting out of our own mind trap.
April 2nd, 2015 at 11:17 am
I really like this – it made me stop and think.
marion
April 2nd, 2015 at 4:29 pm
Can see the whole incident in my mind's eye. Brilliant!
April 3rd, 2015 at 5:44 pm
Love this
April 4th, 2015 at 4:35 am
'
interrupting
my self-criticism —
a cardinal
chirrups
for her mate
—MARILYN SHOEMAKER HAZELTON
.
Wonderful use of juxataposition, those first two lines (I'm a Virgo) are so grounded, and then to change to birdsong, which can stun us into getting out of our own mind trap.
Subtly brilliant!
warmest regards,
Alan