alpenglow the minnow slips a second paw
—Bill Cooper
Issue 15.2 | 5 November 2015
. A Bill Cooper haiku is always a treat. . alpenglow the minnow slips a second paw
—BILL COOPER . . Works for me as a poem, just curious if the minnow is a fishing lure, or the actual fish. Terrific haiku! . .
A one-bun, a term created by Jim Kacian:
Blackbird singing
and a long long walk to be brain-tired out to avoid the internal black dog and survive each footfall at a time
boys fishing a pointillism of raindrops dotting the river
Alan Summers pub. Blithe Spirit Vol. 25 issue 2 (2015)
. . And a standalone monoku:
leaves begin to fall this face too evolves from fish
Alan Summers White Dust Ghosts – a series of haiku poems Publication Credit: Tribe issue 22 (October 2013) .
__My inerudite echo._m Sunset; this mountain stream's minnow; stretched shadow.
__Ah, that pesky cat_!
I had never heard of the term 'alpenglow' – what a beautiful word. I love how nature is embraced in this haiku, Bill.
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November 5th, 2015 at 10:25 am
.
A Bill Cooper haiku is always a treat.
.
alpenglow the minnow slips a second paw
—BILL COOPER
.
.
Works for me as a poem, just curious if the minnow is a fishing lure, or the actual fish.
Terrific haiku!
.
.
A one-bun, a term created by Jim Kacian:
Blackbird singing
and a long long walk to be brain-tired out to avoid the internal black dog and survive each footfall at a time
boys fishing
a pointillism of raindrops
dotting the river
Alan Summers
pub. Blithe Spirit Vol. 25 issue 2 (2015)
.
.
And a standalone monoku:
leaves begin to fall this face too evolves from fish
Alan Summers
White Dust Ghosts – a series of haiku poems
Publication Credit: Tribe issue 22 (October 2013)
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November 5th, 2015 at 11:22 am
__My inerudite echo._m
Sunset; this mountain stream's minnow; stretched shadow.
November 6th, 2015 at 8:45 am
__Ah, that pesky cat_!
November 6th, 2015 at 3:11 pm
I had never heard of the term 'alpenglow' – what a beautiful word. I love how nature is embraced in this haiku, Bill.
marion
November 8th, 2015 at 7:26 pm
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