talking done the dregs of friendship in our mugs
—Rachel Sutcliffe
Issue 15.2 | 15 December 2015
I like your haiku!
coffee
the think
drink
Love the play on mugs!
A powerful mood piece.
reunion – that old argument he still remembers
Bill Kenney
Wow – the word 'dregs' says it all, Rach. A really strong ku. I can feel both anger and sadness in this one. Well done. :)
marion
long distance call – straining to listen between the lines
Dregs; the kigo Autumn… nifty_!
rain ends lemonade in our glasses crickets talk
_m
Rachel, as always you get it just right.
One more cup of coffee for the road? Em, only joking. This is so good.
. talking done the dregs of friendship in our mugs
—RACHEL SUTCLIFFE
Gosh, a short story in its own right. It feels incredibly sad, and potentially a meeting to mend things but ending up finishing things for good. . .
pint mug of tea all my childhood in bookcovers
Alan Summers haijinx volume IV, issue 1 (2011) .
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December 15th, 2015 at 8:51 am
I like your haiku!
coffee
the think
drink
December 15th, 2015 at 9:01 am
Love the play on mugs!
December 15th, 2015 at 9:02 am
A powerful mood piece.
reunion –
that old argument
he still remembers
Bill Kenney
December 16th, 2015 at 1:45 am
Wow – the word 'dregs' says it all, Rach. A really strong ku. I can feel both anger and sadness in this one. Well done. :)
marion
December 16th, 2015 at 4:34 am
long distance call –
straining to listen
between the lines
December 16th, 2015 at 8:10 am
Dregs; the kigo Autumn… nifty_!
rain ends
lemonade in our glasses
crickets talk
_m
December 16th, 2015 at 9:53 am
Rachel, as always you get it just right.
December 16th, 2015 at 10:48 am
One more cup of coffee for the road? Em, only joking. This is so good.
December 16th, 2015 at 12:21 pm
.
talking done
the dregs of friendship
in our mugs
—RACHEL SUTCLIFFE
Gosh, a short story in its own right. It feels incredibly sad, and potentially a meeting to mend things but ending up finishing things for good.
.
.
pint mug of tea
all my childhood
in bookcovers
Alan Summers
haijinx volume IV, issue 1 (2011)
.