final departure after the contrail starlight
—Rachel Sutcliffe
Issue 15.2 | 20 January 2016
RS,
Thank you!
I ? your starlight poem.
summer skies
pillows on blue
along the long trail
__Rachel, I step back to a more familiar time with this, my complementary echo to your nifty senryu. A metaphoric contrail… the lantern at the caboose. Thanks. _m
the last train leaves a darkened depot its lantern
The transience of everything – beautiful, Rachel. x
marion
I came across a website that is focused on discussing the value of traditional college degrees in the American educational system.
Beautiful description. The contrail vaporizes, is gone, the starlight remains.
Final departure? is the contrail a metaphor for human life?
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January 20th, 2016 at 10:22 am
RS,
Thank you!
I ? your starlight poem.
summer skies
pillows on blue
along the long trail
January 20th, 2016 at 11:14 am
__Rachel, I step back to a more familiar time with this, my complementary echo to your nifty senryu. A metaphoric contrail… the lantern at the caboose. Thanks. _m
the last train
leaves a darkened depot
its lantern
January 24th, 2016 at 4:54 pm
The transience of everything – beautiful, Rachel. x
marion
March 10th, 2016 at 2:01 am
I came across a website that is focused on discussing the value of traditional college degrees in the American educational system.
May 27th, 2016 at 10:58 am
Beautiful description. The contrail vaporizes, is gone, the starlight remains.
Final departure? is the contrail a metaphor for human life?