Beautiful haiku Julie. I love how you have captured in the very composition of the verse the sense of breathless wonder that comes from such an unexpected gift. But I also sense a purposeful determination in the movement from the second to third lines – the appropriate expression of true gratitude. Very well done!
March 28th, 2016 at 8:42 am
Beautiful…
March 28th, 2016 at 9:38 am
Yes, beautiful
March 28th, 2016 at 9:52 am
nice
March 28th, 2016 at 3:07 pm
Julie,
Ah, yes. Something completely unexpected.
March 28th, 2016 at 10:46 am
Thank you!
March 28th, 2016 at 10:54 am
Beautiful!
March 28th, 2016 at 11:28 am
A pure sense of wonder in these words which makes multiple enjoyable reads a must!
Well done!
March 28th, 2016 at 1:17 pm
Beautiful haiku Julie. I love how you have captured in the very composition of the verse the sense of breathless wonder that comes from such an unexpected gift. But I also sense a purposeful determination in the movement from the second to third lines – the appropriate expression of true gratitude. Very well done!
Strider
March 29th, 2016 at 1:23 am
Silently beautiful.
marion
March 29th, 2016 at 6:41 am
Interesting…
April 4th, 2016 at 8:29 am
Thanks, All. It's very affirming to have particularly personal poems touch others as well.
April 4th, 2016 at 9:46 am
A perfect haiku. Thank you for this gift.
April 9th, 2016 at 4:35 pm
Pwo chants*
through the rising swell
the night sky
*Google Pwo, Mau Piailug, and go to hokulea.com
May 28th, 2016 at 9:14 am
In the acceptance of all lies grace.