I didn't even think of something as simple as motion until I read Valentina's comment. To me, this haiku expressed the complexity of all the things that pull us this way and that in life, and there is beauty, waiting to capture our attention and become the center of our world if we'd only let it. Thank you for this beautiful haiku.
November 30th, 2016 at 3:36 pm
You have nicely captured the motion of sunflowers.
December 1st, 2016 at 12:56 am
I didn't even think of something as simple as motion until I read Valentina's comment. To me, this haiku expressed the complexity of all the things that pull us this way and that in life, and there is beauty, waiting to capture our attention and become the center of our world if we'd only let it. Thank you for this beautiful haiku.
December 1st, 2016 at 4:28 pm
How delightful!
marion