the sparkle of coins
in the fountain
Issue 17.2 | 26 September 2017
The backdrop of stars overflowing into the poem's space certainly makes you feel you are both seeing coins sparkle in the fountain, and beyond.
The haze has risen
Glancing into the bird bath
Hundred stars float there
Simply lovely, Bob.
So well seen, Bob!
__ Too, I thank you for your generation this: it sees, but we may not see… it. _m
perched in the reddened leaves
Lovely, resonant, expansive haiku…
Birch trees dappled leaves
Tremble in Autumn's breeze
Shadows slant. Sharp. Bright
Lovely image Bob. As we often think of foliage and other typical fall items, fountain coins are such a refreshing image. Sparkling away in autumn sun, it’s very magical.
Lovely image Bob. As we often think of foliage and other typical fall items, fountain coins are refreshing and unexpected. Sparkling away in autumn sun, it’s very magical.
Thanks to everyone for the kind words and the additional haiku.
This is a wonderfully uplifting haiku, Bob, especially when combined with your surname! :)
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