Lovely haiku – as a fisherman myself I recall the quiet moments on a stream, the finesse and mindfulness of casting, the contrast of freedom of being outdoors & "measuring" and 'oneness' in nature. Nicely executed with the longer last line of human endeavor of measuring.
January 9th, 2018 at 11:31 am
Lovely haiku – as a fisherman myself I recall the quiet moments on a stream, the finesse and mindfulness of casting, the contrast of freedom of being outdoors & "measuring" and 'oneness' in nature. Nicely executed with the longer last line of human endeavor of measuring.
January 10th, 2018 at 11:37 am
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roll cast
the fly sets to the last ring
a tail swirls
January 13th, 2018 at 7:54 am
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Wonderful! Love that 'one cast after another' that also 'measures' the brook!
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boys fishing
a pointillism of raindrops
dot the river
Alan Summers
Publication Credit: Haibun, Blithe Spirit Vol. 25 issue 2 (2015)
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