evening cool
the beachcomber’s
cloudy eyes

 


5 Responses

  1. Bob Whitmire Says:

    A pleasure to read. Set my mind adrift all over again. Well done.

    night driving
    too much light
    for cloudy eyes

  2. Mike Schoenburg Says:

    Nice imagery!

    afternoon waves~~~
    the falling sun
    shadows the sand

  3. Mike Schoenburg Says:

    afternoon waves~~~
    the falling sun
    shadows the sand 🌅

  4. Mike Schoenburg Says:

    Nice imagery!

    afternoon waves ~~~
    the falling sun
    shadows the sand 🌅

  5. seaviewwarrenpoint Says:

    Ah, a whole story in this one, Rachel. I imagined an old sailor taking a stroll along the shore and, even though he cannot see very well, he knows the beach like the back of his hand so it is still a comfort to him.

    marion

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