Wonderful pairing of images, both as comparison, but also for the sight and sound of a storm, and the careful preparation of food. Great overall imagery!
I imagined a cosy, comforting scene as the narrator watches someone – a mother or grandmother perhaps – peeling apples, perhaps for a tasty apple pie or crumble. I could even imagine a hint of cinnamon in the warm air of the kitchen!
cold spell
iguanas ?
falling from trees
winter storm
the winding heap
of apple peel
—PADMA THAMPATTY
Wonderful pairing of images, both as comparison, but also for the sight and sound of a storm, and the careful preparation of food. Great overall imagery!
warm regards,
Alan
Thank you so much for taking to read, comment, and appreciate my poem, Alan!
Padma
My pleasure and honour!
warm regards,
Alan
Call of the Page
I imagined a cosy, comforting scene as the narrator watches someone – a mother or grandmother perhaps – peeling apples, perhaps for a tasty apple pie or crumble. I could even imagine a hint of cinnamon in the warm air of the kitchen!
marion
Thank you so much for the lovely comment, Marion!
winter night stand
an apple core full of seeds
Good!