winter storm
the winding heap
of apple peel


7 Responses

  1. Mike Schoenburg Says:

    cold spell
    iguanas 🦎
    falling from trees

  2. Alan Summers Says:

    winter storm
    the winding heap
    of apple peel

    —PADMA THAMPATTY

    Wonderful pairing of images, both as comparison, but also for the sight and sound of a storm, and the careful preparation of food. Great overall imagery!

    warm regards,
    Alan

  3. Padma Says:

    Thank you so much for taking to read, comment, and appreciate my poem, Alan!
    Padma

  4. Alan Summers Says:

    My pleasure and honour!

    warm regards,
    Alan
    Call of the Page

  5. seaviewwarrenpoint Says:

    I imagined a cosy, comforting scene as the narrator watches someone – a mother or grandmother perhaps – peeling apples, perhaps for a tasty apple pie or crumble. I could even imagine a hint of cinnamon in the warm air of the kitchen!

    marion

  6. Padma Thampatty Says:

    Thank you so much for the lovely comment, Marion!

  7. martin1223 Says:

    winter night stand
    an apple core full of seeds

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