sultry night
slack spun into the line
of spider’s silk

 

5 Responses

  1. Mike Schoenburg Says:

    cold spell
    iguanas ?
    falling from trees

  2. Alan Summers Says:

    sultry night
    slack spun into the line
    of spider’s silk

    —CHERIE HUNTER DAY

    A neat show of dissonance, and that observation of spiders and their weaving. A wonderfully confident display of writing, and catching the spider, and the splendidness of their existence.

    Brilliant!

    mistfall
    the swansongs
    of orb spiders
     
    Alan Summers
    Scope (FAWQ magazine vol. 61 no. 6, 2015)

  3. Lesley Anne Swanson Says:

    Lovely, Cherie

  4. Marita Says:

    Beautifully done. All that a haiku should be.

    lone bird on a wire
    decrypting 1000
    songs

    Marita Gargiulo

  5. martin1223 Says:

    across the tendrils of Enceladus silhouetted spider

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