Autumn afternoon we keep our distance in dappled light talking about the life we haven’t shared
—Sylvia Forges-Ryan
Issue 19.1 | 26 July 2019
Sad… The distance will always be filled with a shared unshared life
autumn leaves fall the old stripper sheds her clothes ???
This is such a lovely tanka, I've reread and shared it. Thank you for writing it.
In dappled light, caring vanishes as 'tis whirled away. Well seen. _m
cooler winds whirl to spin our fallen leaves centrifugal care
Shades of a love that never happened.
Very nice.
marion
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July 26th, 2019 at 1:28 pm
Sad…
The distance
will always be filled
with a shared unshared life
July 27th, 2019 at 3:28 am
autumn leaves fall
the old stripper
sheds her clothes ???
July 28th, 2019 at 2:06 am
This is such a lovely tanka, I've reread and shared it. Thank you for writing it.
July 28th, 2019 at 3:45 pm
In dappled light, caring vanishes as 'tis whirled away. Well seen. _m
cooler winds
whirl to spin our fallen leaves
centrifugal care
August 6th, 2019 at 6:12 am
Shades of a love that never happened.
Very nice.
marion