first daffodil
forever
the show-off

 

6 Responses

  1. Alan Summers Says:

    Ah, yes, some flowers show off, as do some people. What came first, the chicken or the egg, the daffodil or the author? ;-)

    I love the edginess behind the beguilingly simple but not so simple haiku.

    warm regards,
    Alan

  2. Hemapriya Chellappan Says:

    Love it!

  3. Ram Chandran Says:

    flowers
    just
    bloom

  4. Bidyut , Prabha Gantayat Says:

    child like flowers
    the more you tinkle
    the more they laugh

    © Bidyut prabha

  5. ormanarlington Says:

    'edginess' :) Clever and effective, Marion. Very nice!

  6. Dawn Apanius Says:

    runners high
    the daffodils
    incandescence

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