end of summer
the cracked face
of a display mannequin

 

3 Responses

  1. papagreenbean Says:

    Nice one, Hifsa! Excellent poem.

    long shadows
    cover the bare mannequin
    between seasons

  2. hifsa Says:

    Thank you. Love yours! <3

  3. martin1223 Says:

    Enjoyed your poem!

    autumn dusk
    from a mannequin’s eyes
    murmuration

    There is a great Twilight Zone episode on mannequins titled “the after-hours” that you can find an abbreviated free version of it on You Tube: The After-Hours Episode aired Jun 10, 1960, Series 1 – Episode thirty-four, I recommend it!

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