telling stories of long ago the sound of rain Published by Barbara Kaufmann Barbra Kaufmann is a retired RN with lots of time for writing poetry, photography, gardening, walking and grandchildren! View all posts by Barbara Kaufmann
__ Very nice "b"… 'tis doubly artful, scene and verse_! _m covered bridge deck squeaks harmonize this brook with rain's solo Reply
Beautiful!
Valorie:
Love the Haika, words and the art.
Dave Borland
Thank you Dave. I am so glad you enjoyed this.
I am glad you enjoyed the sound of rain on the roof. I know I did!
__ Very nice "b"… 'tis doubly artful, scene and verse_! _m
covered bridge
deck squeaks harmonize this brook
with rain's solo
Thanks for your comments, Magyar. I love 'deck squeaks,' and I can hear them!
drops of rain
on the window
altered vision
rainy afternoon
our stories change
in the retelling
All together beautiful! Gentle and evocative.